Wednesday, October 16, 2024
VLADIMIR by Julia May Jonas
This novel made me think of Edward Albee’s Who’s Afraid of Virginia Woolf?. As in Albee’s play, the plot focuses on two
couples, all four of whom write and teach at a small, pricey New England
college—upstate New York, in this case.
The first-person unnamed narrator here is the wife in the older of the
two couples. She and her husband have an
open marriage, but he is facing possible termination due to a series of affairs
he had with female students, some of whom have filed grievances. To be clear, these occurred before the
college outlawed such relationships, and all of these students were consenting
adults. The narrator merely shrugs off
her husband’s infidelities, because she has had several flings of her own. Now her lustful imagination is going wild
over a new professor named Vladimir, and a teaser at the beginning of the novel
hints at weird things to come. The
narrator goes completely off the rails, but the only consequences she suffers
are for seemingly being complicit in her husband’s sexual peccadilloes. As in the Albee play, this is a boozy bunch,
but I don’t mean to sound judgmental. In
fact, one major theme here is that one couple’s marriage contract should not be
the subject of speculation or disapproval by outside parties. I agree wholeheartedly with their right to
choose the parameters of their marriage, even if theirs is not the type of
marriage that most of us want for ourselves.
In any case, this is what good writing looks like, and the author kept
me engaged throughout. However, the
editing sorely needs some grammatical improvement. For example, on page 190, a sentence begins
with this phrase: “The thought of he and Sid and Alexis all working
together.” Ouch. That makes my teeth hurt.
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